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Me too, tho French comics tend to keep there colors minimum, the book looked god but could have been much richer.
Not every brick or wood plank needs be fully out lined.
I suspect the setting was meant to be very dark, few light sources. was this some thing to be left to the colorist?
My personal philosophy is leave little to the colorist, its lazy. Any publishable work should be able to stand on its own in bW before the colorist ever gets near it.
The angles are reasonably sound.
The proportion and an subtle aspect of fore shortening would have been well played in the extended gun hand for dramatic effect.
How ever, with a little re-working and a few more finishing touches, I dare say this work would be worthy of the walking dead it self. Thats a compliment.
This commentary is meant to be constructive criticism in nature. It is directed specifically at neither penciler nor inker.
Be well.
To each his own tho, I loved working on these pages.
It must be said, Its more than I am doing at the moment.
Hope things change for ya, love seeing your new work.